Talk:2013 Football League Championship play-off final/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 10:11, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

EFL Championship should be Football League Championship for this time period
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"It Palace's fourth win in five" - a word is missing here
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"Crystal Palace ended the next season in 11th place in the Premier League, while Watford finished the following season in the Championship 13th place." - repetition of the similar phrasing
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"The game ended goalless but Palace's top scorer Glenn Murray was injured" - what injury?
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"Palace went into the match having won once in their past eleven game" - typo; should be worded as games
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"without Murray who was replaced by Aaron Wilbraham who had scored once in his 25 appearances that season." - I think this portion of text could be changed a little?
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Wikilink Leicester City the first time it is mentioned in the prose
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"The hosts won the match 1–0 with a David Nugent header from a Anthony Knockaert free kick late in the match." - repetition of the word "match"
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Wikilink penalty to Penalty kick (association football) and corner to Corner kick
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Wikilink free kick to the relevant article
Linked earlier. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"went down injured in the 15th minute" - what was the injury?
Calf, done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"who delayed too long" - delayed too long in doing?
Reworded. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"in the Palace goal." - Palace goal area.?
No, this is fine in Brit Eng, he was "in goal". The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"a cross from Zaha was headed across goal" - think there are some words missing here
It makes sense to me, but I've added "back" to see if that makes it clearer. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"a free kick from Abdi from 25 yards" - use the convert template here?
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"Two corners for Watford came to nothing and the referee blew" - think it would be better to clarify that it was a whistle that the referee blew to end the match
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Reference 4 directs to an airline website link for departures from London Stansted Airport and not to the BBC Sport newsitem of Watford's first leg victory over Leicester
"Whoooops... Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Reference 8 title: "Crystal Palace 1-0 West Ham" - the hyphen should be replaced by an en dash
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to respond/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 14:17, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

MWright96 I think I've covered all of the above, let me know what you think. Cheers for the review. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]