Talk:2013 Bahrain GP2 Series round/GA1

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 16:14, 9 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"Leimer fended off pressure from the fast-starting Coletti to maintain his pole position advantage in the opening sequence of corners." The first half of this paragraph in the lead is talking about which race?
"Leimer pulled out an healthy advantage in the following laps and ceded " Maybe "but" and not "and" here?
"cut by a solitary point" Cut by a solitary point or cut TO a solitary point?
"Leimer then moved to the top of the time sheets with a new GP2 Series lap record of the Bahrain International Circuit and later lowered it to a one minute and 39.427 seconds lap time" This is saying he a) set the record, and then b)broke his own new record. Is that accurate?
- Yes. MWright96 (talk) 18:17, 9 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"not allowed to make pit stops." Not allowed or not required?
"when Richelmi after which a steady stream" sentence could use more words or a rewrite
"the circuit's the run-off" tpoo many "the";s
"The second race began at 10:50 local time." Specify the date.
In one section you say "The top eight finishers scored points towards their respective championships.", but you later say that the top-ten scored points in the feature race...
"o win for RUSSIAN TIME after only four races" No all caps.
" nine races left in the season." Nine races or nine race meetings?

That's all from me. Made two minor edits as I went. Courcelles (talk) 16:40, 9 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Courcelles: Thank you for taking the time to review this article. Every one of the above points have been actioned. MWright96 (talk) 18:17, 9 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]