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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:50, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Shall take on this review as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 19:50, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

General

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Lead

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Overview

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Prize fund

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Double-elimination round

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  • "The previous year's runner-up Kuo Po-cheng" - how about 2010 runner-up instead?
  • "The 1995 champion Oliver Ortmann lost his opening match" - Gulf Times doesn't mention the fact that Ortmann is the 1995 champion
  • "Shane Van Boening, one of only two Americans on the tournament" - a second comma is missing at the end of this portion of text
  • Also the text in bold of the above sentence should be in the tournament
  • Radosław Babica is overlinked
  • "Winners in the winners' bracket advance" - advanced
  • "while those in the losers' bracket winners will play the winners' bracket losers" - played
  • "on the next day." - the following day.
  • "Wu lead 2–0," - led

Early rounds (last 64-last 16)

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  • "The tournament changed to a single elimination tournament from June 29 to July 1." - a reliable source is needed to verify this sentence
  • Francisco Bustamante and Tōru Kuribayashi are overlinked
  • "The Round of 64 was played on the 29th." - June 29 per MOS:DATES
  • "Antonio Gabica led Mika Immonen 4–1 and 10–6 when he scratched in rack 17, when Immonen won the next four racks to go hill-hill." - allowing Immonen to win
  • "In the last 32 played on the 30th," - June 30
  • "with Biado winning the remaining racks to win 11–9." - taking
  • "Also played on the 30th, - same issue as the fourth point
  • Daryl Peach and Shane Van Boening is overlinked
  • "Defending champion Francisco Bustamante had only five minutes between matches," - Bustamante, who had

Later rounds(quarter-finals–final)

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References

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  • Those references that lack publication dates and authors should be included in the article
  • Reference 5 is incomplete in that it the archive year is not filled in correctly, lacks the author, publication date, access date, and the 2 in the work field is redundant
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 07:00, 14 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Reference 22 is missing the author, publication and access date
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 07:00, 14 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Reference 27 is dead and needs archiving; it also is missing vital information such as access date and work
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 07:00, 14 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Am going to put the review on hold to allow the nominator to respond/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 12:34, 12 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I've done all of the above, accept doing the publication dates of the sources, which may take me a little time (in the WPAs infinite wisdom, the date isn't actually shown on the item itself, you have to mix and match from other sources. Bare with me. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 07:00, 14 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
All caught up now MWright96. I've progressed with all of the above. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 07:15, 14 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Lee Vilenski: Now promoting to GA class. I've made a minor change to the article. MWright96 (talk) 08:12, 15 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]