Talk:2011 Subway Fresh Fit 500/GA1
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Reviewer: MathewTownsend (talk · contribs) 12:01, 19 December 2011 (UTC) Hi,
I will start this review shortly. Looks good! MathewTownsend (talk) 12:01, 19 December 2011 (UTC)
- Review
Just a few questions about the prose.
- Race
- "competition caution was scheduled for the 40th lap in the race" - what is a competition caution and why is it scheduled for a particular lap during the race?
Done Linked to Glossary of motorsport terms#C. -- Nascar1996(Talk • Contribs) 02:20, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
- "competition caution was scheduled for the 40th lap in the race" - what is a competition caution and why is it scheduled for a particular lap during the race?
- "Three laps later, Newman overtook the lead after passing Newman," - must be a typo
- Done Changed to Hamlin instead of Newman. -- Nascar1996(Talk • Contribs) 02:20, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
- "Three laps later, Newman overtook the lead after passing Newman," - must be a typo
- "and Kenseth became the leader. After the green flag pit stops concluded, Johnson continued to be the leader," - is something left out here?
- Are you thinking of the pit stops are left out? -- Nascar1996(Talk • Contribs) 02:20, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
- But when did Johnson become the leader, if after the pit stops concluded, Johnson continued to be the leader? What am I missing. MathewTownsend (talk) 02:39, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
- He was the leader, then while making his pit stop he lost the lead to Kenseth, then when everyone else pitted he got the lead back. -- Nascar1996(Talk • Contribs) 03:18, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
- But when did Johnson become the leader, if after the pit stops concluded, Johnson continued to be the leader? What am I missing. MathewTownsend (talk) 02:39, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
- Are you thinking of the pit stops are left out? -- Nascar1996(Talk • Contribs) 02:20, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
- "and Kenseth became the leader. After the green flag pit stops concluded, Johnson continued to be the leader," - is something left out here?
- Post-race
- Although Kyle Busch was leading the race near the end, Gordon passed him with nine laps left - why is this in the "Post-race" as it sounds like it happened during the race?
- I placed this here because it gives the reader some knowledge of how the race finished without reading the race summary section. -- Nascar1996(Talk • Contribs) 02:20, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
- Although Kyle Busch was leading the race near the end, Gordon passed him with nine laps left - why is this in the "Post-race" as it sounds like it happened during the race?
Everything else looks good. I did a little copy editing and disambiged a couple of links.[1] Please feel free to change any mistakes.
MathewTownsend (talk) 01:37, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Does it follow the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
Congratulations! MathewTownsend (talk) 13:49, 20 December 2011 (UTC)