Talk:2011 IZOD IndyCar World Championship/GA1

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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 15:40, 18 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Lead section

Just wondering why there is a source in the lead?

Removed --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 23:49, 20 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Report

"The races at Homestead and at the International Speedway Corporation tracks were removed from the schedule following the 2010 season." Link the 2010 season.

Done --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 23:49, 20 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"Franchitti was eighteen points ahead of Power, retaking the championship points lead from him with a second-place finish at Kentucky Speedway two weeks previously." Possible you could link that race?

Done --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 23:49, 20 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"The race's honorary grand marshal was skateboarder Tony Hawk, who gave the command to start engines." Isn't it "to start the engines" or am I mistaken?

Done --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 23:49, 20 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"Tony Kanaan, driving the #82 GEICO Dallara for KV Racing Technology" Link Dallara.

Done --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 23:49, 20 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Add an image of Tony Kanaan, noting that he qualified on pole.

Done --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 23:49, 20 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Remove the qualifying and the scoring when abandoned tables in this section. Read below for the reason why.

Done --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 23:49, 20 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Can you add the details of the laps before the crash?

Honestly, it was as simple as three-wide racing all throughout the field, nothing truly notable happened first as the crash took place so early in the race. --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 20:45, 19 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Reactions

"At the time of his death, Wheldon had been working with IndyCar officials to develop the ICONIC chassis, with the intention of improving safety in the sport." I would perfer you put the citation at the end of the sentence rather than right in the middle. You don't have to do this however.

Done --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 00:20, 21 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"On December 9, 2011, IndyCar decided that they were not going to return to Las Vegas for the 2012 season." Link the 2012 season.

Done --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 00:20, 21 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"with Dario Franchitti, Oriol Servià and Alex Lloyd the most vocal opponents." Dario Franchitti has already been linked.

Done --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 00:20, 21 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"1979 Formula One World Champion Jody Scheckter, whose son Tomas was involved in the accident" You already linked Tomas Scheckter.

Done --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 00:20, 21 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

while NASCAR Sprint Cup Series champion Jimmie Johnson called for the series to leave oval racing altogether," You already linked Sprint Cup Series.

Done --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 00:20, 21 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"though Formula One driver Anthony Davidson downplayed the influence of the prize" Link Formula One.

Done --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 00:20, 21 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"One was Scott Speed, who previously ran open-wheel Formula One cars for Scuderia Toro Rosso" Unlink Formula One.

Done --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 00:20, 21 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"and for Team Red Bull in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series in 2009 and 2010." You already linked Sprint Cup Series.

Done --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 00:20, 21 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"Dario Franchitti and Chip Ganassi Racing had been planning to test the 2012-spec Dallara chassis at the circuit in the week following the race." Dario Franchitti and Chip Ganassi Racing have already been linked.

Done --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 00:20, 21 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Classification

I think a classification section is needed here. Add the qualifying and race results in this section.

Done --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 23:49, 20 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Standings after the race

I think this section is needed too. Add the championship standings here. Yes, I know that no points were awarded due to the tragic accident but I think readers will still want to know the standings.

Done --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 00:20, 21 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Add an image of Franchitti, noting that he won the championship.

Done --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 00:20, 21 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

References

Ref 9 is broken for me.

Done --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 00:20, 21 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Going to place on hold for now. good888 (talk) 13:52, 19 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, @Good888:, for the reviews of so many motorsports articles. Your reviews are much appreciated. I'll be quite busy tonight and I'm uncertain I'll be able to edit much at all (I have two exams tomorrow and real life comes first for me, of course), but I'll fix these as soon as I can. Regarding Ref 9, I have searched for an archived copy and cannot find one anywhere, which is why the Racing-Reference one is included. Would you like me to remove the ref entirely or tag it with ^{[dead link‍]}? Thanks, --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 20:45, 19 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Bentvfan54321: No problem. As for the dead link, try finding another reliable source. If not, you might as well tag it with ^{[dead link‍]}. good888 (talk) 09:52, 20 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Good888: I believe all issues have been resolved. Thanks again! --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 00:20, 21 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Bentvfan54321: I just found one more issue. I think the qualifying section could be expanded a bit. Perhaps you note the drivers that qualified in the top ten? Once that is done I will promote this article to GA class. good888 (talk) 10:03, 21 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Good888: Done. --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 14:56, 21 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah that's fine now. Promoting to GA class. good888 (talk) 15:51, 21 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]