Talk:2010–11 Princeton Tigers men's basketball team/GA1
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Reviewer: YE Tropical Cyclone 00:46, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
Here are my comments:
Lead
[edit]- "The team competes in the Ivy League athletic conference. The team is coming off of a 22–9 2009–10 season in which it achieved the most wins by a Princeton men's basketball team since the 1998–99 team, its first back-to-back finishes of at least second place in the Ivy since 2001–02 season, its first postseason appearance since the 2003–04 team went to the 2004 NCAA Men's Division I Basketball Tournament" sentence is too long
- "and its first postseason victory since the 1998–99 team won two games in the 1999 National Invitation Tournament." Sicne when do you start a sentence with and
- the prior "." was suppose to be a ","
- Remove the two red links in league
- You say "Princeton" tto many times during the lead. YE Tropical Cyclone
- I cut it from 7 to 5 times.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 02:17, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
Preview
[edit]- Remove red link in section
- "It was the first Princeton team to be the preseason selection since the 2004–05 Princeton team." Preseason selection? wtf is that?
- Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 02:36, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
Paying Style
[edit]No comments here
Schedule
[edit]- "The team posted a perfect 12–0 home record.[22] In early February, the team lost its adopted pediatric brain tumor patient who had previously sat on the team's bench" Two things: Did he die or just was too ill too watch anymore? and what role did he play?
- Fixed up a bit.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:07, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
- Any info on the first Harvard-Princeton game.
- added a bit.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 02:49, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
- If I recall correctly, the one of the player of Princeton hit the game wining shot in the Ivy League one game playoff.
- added his name.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 02:49, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
- "Princeton was quickly declared the winner of the imaginary payscale champion of the tournament for having the highest starting salary among its graduates as well as the champion for a host of academic related superior comparisons" wtf? what does this half to do with anything?
- Removed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:09, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
Honors
[edit]- The table is broken.
- Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:13, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
I'm putting the article on hold for now.YE Tropical Cyclone 00:46, 5 May 2011 (UTC)