Talk:2009 Football League Championship play-off final/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:57, 20 May 2020 (UTC)
Will be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 16:57, 20 May 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead
[edit]- "The top two teams of the 2008–09 Football League Championship season gained automatic promotion to the Premier League, while the teams placed from third to sixth place" - repetition of the word "teams" in the same sentence
- "Jamie Ward became the first player ever to be sent off in a play-off final, while his teammate Lee Hendrie was also sent off after the final whistle." - try to avoid repetition of the phrase "sent off" in the same sentence
Background
[edit]- Wikilink substitute to Substitute (association football)
- Wikilink Achilles tendon injury to the relevant article
- "a 51st strike from" - 51st minute
- "secured a 1–0 win for United on the night, and a 2–1 aggregate win." - repetition of the word "win"
Match details (Background)
[edit]- Please briefly explain who Brian Mawhinney was not the uninformed
First half
[edit]- "He passed to Chris McCann who was tackled," - tacked by whom?
- Sources don't say. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:10, 20 May 2020 (UTC)
- "McCann headed over the bar from inside the six-yard box while Howard's free kick two minutes later sailed over the bar." - repetition of "over the bar"
- "curling the ball just wide of Kenny's post from 20 yards." - the convert template should be used on the text in bold
- "Thompson's looping header was wide." - went?
Second half
[edit]- Wikilink hamstring injury
- "Ward was shown a second yellow" - yellow card
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 18:31, 20 May 2020 (UTC)
- MWright96 cheers, much appreciated as always, I've addressed/responded to everything above. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:10, 20 May 2020 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: Now promoting to GA class. I've fixed a few errors in one of the changes made to the article. MWright96 (talk)
- MWright96 cheers, much appreciated as always, I've addressed/responded to everything above. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:10, 20 May 2020 (UTC)