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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:59, 23 October 2020 (UTC)
Reviewing for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 14:59, 23 October 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Infobox
[edit]- The name of the tournament should be mentioned in the tournament_name= field
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:33, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- The dates for the tournament are in September not August
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:33, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- The second word in the phrase "Single Elimination" does not need to begin with a capital letter
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:33, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]- "was a professional nine-ball pool competition, the second World Cup of Pool," - and the second edition of the
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:39, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "from September from 25 to 30, 2007." - 25 to 30 September 2007.
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:39, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "The tournament was organised by Matchroom Sport, sponsored by poker website Partypoker, and broadcast on Sky TV." - mention it was actually broadcast in other countries not just on Sky in the UK
- Changed. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:39, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "The defending champions were the Filipino team of Efren Reyes and Francisco Bustamante who had defeated Rodney Morris and Earl Strickland in the final of the 2006 event." - a detail that is missing here is that Morris and Strickland were part of the USA team in the 2006 event
- Added Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:39, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "The Philippines were eliminated in the semi-finals by the Chinese team. In the final, Li Hewen and Fu Jianbo representing China defeated Mika Immonen and Markus Juva from Finland on a deciding rack 11–10." - both of the Chinese players should be first mentioned in the first sentence of this portion of text
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:39, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- Also references in the lead should be avoided per MOS:CITELEAD
- Yeah, no idea why that was there. Removed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:39, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
Format
[edit]- "The tournament was played between 25 and 30 August 2007 as scotch doubles," - September per sources
- Done. Not sure why this was introduced. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:48, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "at the Outland club" - nightclub per sources
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:48, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "The event would see 16 seeded teams, and 16 unseeded teams of two play alternating shots in scotch doubles style." - repetition of "teams"
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:48, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "The defending champions were Efren Reyes and Francisco Bustamante representing the Philipines," - typo; should be Philippines
- Fixed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:48, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- Somehow, Morris is mentioned but Strickland is not in the two citations used to verify the above sentence
- Weird, probably because Strickland didn't play in 2007. I've added a suitable cite. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:48, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- Reference 7 has more information about who broadcast the tournament. It might be worth considering adding a coverage sub-section split from the main section dedicated to this
- Yah, I'll do some work. Doing.... Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:48, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- I've added something for this. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 22:24, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- Yah, I'll do some work. Doing.... Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:48, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
Teams
[edit]- Consider adding information on which teams were seeded and which teams were not with the appropriate source
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:53, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "The participating teams are shown below:[11][10]" - refs in numerical order please
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:53, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- He-wen's surname should not include a hyphen in this section
- Fixed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:53, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
Summary
[edit]- "The first round of the event was played from 25 to 27 August as a race to seven racks." - September as a race to eight
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:36, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "Before the event, the Malaysian team of Patrick Ooi and Ibrahim Bin Amir withdrew from the event, due to "unforeseen circumstances", and were replaced by a Belgian team of Serge Das and Noel Bruynooghe." - pair
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:36, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "The pair met the Netherland second team;" - Dutch "B" side
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:36, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "The Russian 16th seeds of Ruslan Chinachov and European number one Konstantin Stepanov" - The 16th seeded Russian pair of
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:36, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "were defeated by the Croatian team in the opening round 5–8." - mention the Crotatian players for consistency
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:36, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "over David Alcaide and Antonio Fazane despite dropping the opening rack." - mention Alcaide and Fazane played for Spain
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:36, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "The English team of Imran Majid and Daryl Peach came from 3–6 behind to defeat the Polish side 8–6." - the inclusion of the players for Poland will help matters here
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:36, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "as the previous years finalist USA team won 8–7 over Malta having taken the last four racks." - 2006 finalists
- done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:36, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "The second round was played on 27 to 29 August as a race to seven racks." - September as a race to eight per source
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:36, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "and having trailed 6–7 won the final two racks to win 8–7.[19][20]" - the second citation isn't needed here since it does not mention the Japan v Dutch "A" match
- Removed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:36, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "but tied the match at 6–6 before winning the match 8–6." - repetition of "match"
- Changed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:36, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "The USA team were wearing orange shirts, the traditional colour of the Netherlands, after both Dutch teams had been eliminated." - repetition of "teams"
- Changed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:36, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "The Belgian team, made from Bruynooghe and Das, ranked 46th and 60th in Europe" - composed of Bruynooghe and Das who were ranked 46th and 60th in Europe,
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:36, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "The defending champion Filipino team" - championship winning Filipino
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:36, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "The next two racks," - During the next two racks,
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:36, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "to win them before they broke and ran rack 13 to win the match." - for victory.
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:38, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "The quarter-finals were played on 29 August as a race to nine racks." - September
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:38, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "with both players jumping up and down in joy after the shot." - in celebration
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:43, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "Having defeated the Taiwan team in the second round, the Belgian team were "drained"," - repetition of "team"
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:43, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "the Belgian team were "drained"," - according to whom?
- Clarified. I don't have an exact writer. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:43, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "The defending champions were defeated by the Chinese team 6–9." - please mention the defending champions were the Philippines
- Clarified. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:43, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "The last quarter-final featured Finland's" - saw
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:43, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "The semi-finals were played on 30 August as a race to nine racks." - September for accuracy
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:38, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "The first semi-final featured 10th seeded Finland play the 11th seeded Canadian team." - saw the 10th
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:43, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "The Canadian team only had nine shots in the entire match." - played nine shots in the entire game.
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:43, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "The other semi-final match was played between China, seeded 8th and the unseeded Japanese team." - no mention of China being the 8th seed in both the sources used to verify this sentence
- Added a citation. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:43, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "However, Hewen missed a shot on the 2-ball the following rack allowing Japan to the table," - during the following rack, allowing
- "The final was also played on 30 August," - September
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:38, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "The Chinese team of Hewen and Jianbo met the Finland team of Juva and Immonen." - repetition of "team"
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:43, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "with six in the first 15 racks; having had just ten in the rest of the tournament." - the semi colon should be replaced by a comma
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:43, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "China took a lead at 6–4 and 7–5." - China led 6–4 and then 7–5.
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:43, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "The Finland team, however, won four straight frames to level the match at 10–10.." - the extra full stop is redundant
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:43, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
Main draw
[edit]- The seeds in the draw need to be verified with the correct source
- added Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:54, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- The word "Kanada" should not be next to the country of Canada in the semi-final draw
- Removed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:54, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
References
[edit]- Should the "z" in "AzBilliards" be capitalised?
- As per the last review, the website uses this capitalisation. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:25, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- "Sport, Matchroom" and "Release, Press" are not authors
- Removed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:25, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- Reference 1 is missing the date it was published
- Already had a published date... Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:25, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- Reference 3 is missing the date it was accessed and the original url link in the url= field
- Hmm, it all seemed ok. I think it was just missing the url-status field. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:25, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- The word "venue" in the title of the same reference should begin with a capital letter
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:25, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- The archive url in Reference 5 is linked to information concerning the 2008 tournament not the 2007 tournament
- Fixed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:25, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- Reference 6 is missing the date it was accessed and both of the links are to the incorrect article
- Fixed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:25, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- Reference 8 is missing the publication date and the access date
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:25, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- Reference 11's url and archive urls are linked to the 2008 tournament not the 2007 event
- Fixed archive Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:25, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- Reference 13 is a duplicate of Reference 11
- Fixed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:25, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- The archive link for Reference 21 will need changing to the one from 2007
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:25, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- References 22 and 23 are missing the publication dates
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:25, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- Reference 25 is a duplicate of Reference 10
- fixed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:25, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above MWright96 (talk) 17:23, 23 October 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review MWright96, very in-depth, I appreciate it. I've made the changes above. :). Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:44, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
- @Lee Vilenski: Now promoting to GA class. I've made a couple of changes to the article. MWright96 (talk) 07:31, 26 October 2020 (UTC)