Talk:2007 UAW-Ford 500/GA1

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Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 04:23, 7 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Let us review this NASCAR article

Change as the new leader of restrictor plate wins to as the driver with the most restrictor plate wins with twelve
After the sentence Johnson was still leading as the final lap began add but and remove the full stop .

Change held the Friday before Sunday's race to held on Friday
The redlink to 2005 Pocono 500 is not required.
Change mandated to start 41st and 42nd to mandateed to start at the back . Kpgj hpjm 15:25, 8 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

It is the first mention of McMurray, so change his name to full and link him .
Remove the words of cars .
Remove the words a narrow margin
Change .Hamlin took the lead to and he took the lead
Johnson was leading on lap 21 , but Hamlin restarted in the lead on lap 22 - Did Johnson make a pit stop.
lost the first position to lost the lead
Weird sentence - Stewart moved past Sadler on the 133rd lap after receiving assistance from Stewart. This needs to be fixed .
Change Then Labonte to Then he
Petty's left or right rear blew . If there is no information write Petty's tire blew

@MWright96: On-Hold for now , when these issues are fixed , I will take a final look . The article is solid , though . Kpgjhpjm 15:31, 9 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- {reply|Kpgihplm}} Thanks for the review. Everything has been addressed apart from the McMurray query because he is already mentioned and linked in the practice and qualifying sub-section. MWright96 (talk) 18:12, 9 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  - @MWright96: Promoting, thanks for another solid article. But please be more careful with your pings . Kpgj hpjm 03:01, 10 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]