Talk:2007 Emirates Cup/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 05:03, 5 August 2016 (UTC)
Will be reviewing this. MWright96 (talk) 05:03, 5 August 2016 (UTC)
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate
use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate
use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- Lead
- You want to change "football" to "association football" to avoid confusion for American readers
- Background
- "Details of the tournament were formally announced weeks later," - How many weeks later exactly?
- Summary
- "Referee Alan Kelly turned down Inter's appeals for a penalty," - I understand this but I think it would be better as Inter Milan's for non-football fans
- "Inter nearly equalised through Maxwell as his effort hit the hot," - I did not understand the word that is bolded, do you mean post?
- "Wenger tweaked his team's formation after the break from their customary 4–4–2 to 4–4–1–1 ," - the extra space between the second "1" and the comma aren't needed
- "Near the end of normsl time" - spelling error.
- References
- No dead links
Nice work. On hold until points are actioned. MWright96 (talk) 08:37, 5 August 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking the time to review @MWright96: have made the corrections you've suggested. Lemonade51 (talk) 09:48, 5 August 2016 (UTC)
- @Lemonade51: Can now pass this review. MWright96 (talk) 11:36, 5 August 2016 (UTC)