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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 05:03, 5 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Will be reviewing this. MWright96 (talk) 05:03, 5 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  2. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  3. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  4. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  5. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  6. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
Lead
  • You want to change "football" to "association football" to avoid confusion for American readers
Background
  • "Details of the tournament were formally announced weeks later," - How many weeks later exactly?
Summary
  • "Referee Alan Kelly turned down Inter's appeals for a penalty," - I understand this but I think it would be better as Inter Milan's for non-football fans
  • "Inter nearly equalised through Maxwell as his effort hit the hot," - I did not understand the word that is bolded, do you mean post?
  • "Wenger tweaked his team's formation after the break from their customary 4–4–2 to 4–4–1–1 ," - the extra space between the second "1" and the comma aren't needed
  • "Near the end of normsl time" - spelling error.
References

Nice work. On hold until points are actioned. MWright96 (talk) 08:37, 5 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Lemonade51: Can now pass this review. MWright96 (talk) 11:36, 5 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]