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Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 01:33, 11 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will review this one as well . Kpgjhpjm 01:33, 11 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • Hamlin held the first position to Hamlin held the lead .
  • Remove the words for the lead
  • Kurt Busch led on which laps and Kenseth passed whom to take the lead ?
  • Change three practice session to three practice sessions
  • Change in the qualifier to in qualifying
  • Weird sentence - Kyle Busch was thirteenth, and recorded the nineteenth fastest lap .
  • What is meant by staggered his pit stop ?
  • Change in the center of turn two to in the middle of turn two
  • The Kyle Petty caution sentence could be reworded for better flow
  • In the lead it is mentioned Kenseth retook the lead on lap 98 , but in the race section it is written lap 99 . Which one is correct ?
  • Kurt Busch had worn tyres , did Edwards make a pit stop or Busch did not pit ?
  • Earnhardt was passed by Biffle and Kurt Busch, so how can Biffle pass him 16 laps later if he was already ahead.
  • Change McMurray's and Montoya made contact to McMurray and Montoya made contact
  • Change contacted Raines to made contact with Raines
  • Remove the words at the inside of the track

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and you didn't fix the Earnhardt -Biffle issue above . When these are fixed , I will be promoting the article. Kpgjhpjm 01:45, 12 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Mwright96: Yes , promoting Kpgjhpjm 06:55, 12 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]