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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 23:17, 13 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]


I'll have this one done soon! JAGUAR  23:17, 13 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments

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  • "It was Mears' first and (as of 2016) the only win the Nextel Cup Series (today the Sprint Cup Series)" - might be better as It was Mears' first and (as of 2016) the only win of the Nextel Cup Series, now known as the Sprint Cup Series or something similar
    • Reworded
  • "Starting at the Coca-Cola 600, 1988 NASCAR Winston Cup Series champion Bill Elliott" - vague, are we still talking about the 2007 race?
    • Yes we are. This suggestion has been taken in.
  • "The third caution was prompted on the same lap when Tony Raines got loose and slid sideways" - what does this mean?
    • It means Raines lost control of his car.
  • "During the caution, All of the race leaders made pit stops" - lowercase
    • Done
  • "slowed on track, and spun at turn four while driving gingerly to pit road" - a tad informal. How about cautiously?
    • Done

Those were all of the (minor) prose issues I could bring up, but overall a comprehensive article. Once they're all clarified this can become a GA! JAGUAR  23:48, 13 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]