Talk:2007 Coca-Cola 600/GA1
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 23:17, 13 January 2016 (UTC)
I'll have this one done soon! JAGUAR 23:17, 13 January 2016 (UTC)
Initial comments
[edit]- "It was Mears' first and (as of 2016) the only win the Nextel Cup Series (today the Sprint Cup Series)" - might be better as It was Mears' first and (as of 2016) the only win of the Nextel Cup Series, now known as the Sprint Cup Series or something similar
- Reworded
- "Starting at the Coca-Cola 600, 1988 NASCAR Winston Cup Series champion Bill Elliott" - vague, are we still talking about the 2007 race?
- Yes we are. This suggestion has been taken in.
- "The third caution was prompted on the same lap when Tony Raines got loose and slid sideways" - what does this mean?
- It means Raines lost control of his car.
- "During the caution, All of the race leaders made pit stops" - lowercase
- Done
- "slowed on track, and spun at turn four while driving gingerly to pit road" - a tad informal. How about cautiously?
- Done
Those were all of the (minor) prose issues I could bring up, but overall a comprehensive article. Once they're all clarified this can become a GA! JAGUAR 23:48, 13 January 2016 (UTC)
- @Jaguar: Thank you for the review! I have made all of the suggested corrections, Z105space (talk) 06:55, 14 January 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks! OK, this is good to go now. JAGUAR 14:27, 14 January 2016 (UTC)