Talk:2007 Bernard Matthews H5N1 outbreak/GA1
GA Reassessment
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As an article on the Wikipedia:WikiProject Good articles/Project quality task force/Sweeps list, I am reviewing this article. And from the looks of its current state, it doesn't look like GA material. Here's why:
- There are 3 Citations Needed in the article.
- Also, maybe some paragraphs should be merged with others, but that's what I think.
If the problems don't get fixed in 7 days, the article will be delisted. GamerPro64 (talk) 01:15, 23 November 2009 (UTC)
Thank you for carrying out this review. I have carried out a revamp of the page:
- With regard to the matters that concerned you:
- I have fixed the three missing citations.
- I have merged several paras to make the article less bitty.
- Additional improvements:
- All dates are now in a consistent {UK} format.
- All references are now at the end of sentences.
- Improved the writing
- Typo fixed.
- Categories revamped.
I hope that this maintains the page's GA status. Indeed, I should like a view as to what further changes might be required to bring it up to FA standard? Bridgeplayer (talk) 20:58, 23 November 2009 (UTC)
- I might tell you how to improve it on your talk page, but for now, I'll keep its GA status. GamerPro64 (talk) 21:15, 23 November 2009 (UTC)
- Thank you. Bridgeplayer (talk) 22:40, 23 November 2009 (UTC)