Talk:2005–06 South-West Indian Ocean cyclone season/GA1

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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 17:40, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Hurricanehink. I will be reviewing this article today. Like most of your other recent submissions, this one also looks great. It appears that there are few issues that I have with this article. As long as you work on this review, this article will probably pass quickly.--12george1 (talk) 17:40, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

"A series of four short-lived systems occurred from September to November in the northeastern portion of the basin." - But Bertie also developed that month in addition to those other four systems

Clarified that Bertie was after these short-lived storms.

"Boloetse took an erratic track across Madagascar," - Wikilink Madagascar. I noticed that you mentioned Madagascar 17 times and did not link it until the very last time

Added in the lead. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 19:41, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

"when it brought heavy rainfall to Mozambique." - Ditto with Mozambique, except that was never linked anywhere in the article

Ditto, added to lead. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 19:41, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

"January 20, signalling its formation as a tropical disturbance." - Shouldn't it be "signaling"?

Weirdly, this is a case where I was right by accident. From what I've read, it should be "signalling" for non-American writing. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 19:41, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

There's a few errors on reference #2. It says " 2011 Annual Tropical Cyclone Report", while written in 2006 and the url says 2006 :P --12george1 (talk) 17:40, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Oops! That's what I get for copy and pasting refs. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 19:41, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I'm don't gonna make a big deal about it if names aren't consistent throughout the references, but you should at least stay consistent in the same reference. Look at #5, for example. "Knapp, K. R.; M. C. Kruk; D. H. Levinson; H. J. Diamond; C. J. Neumann". Maybe you should just change "Knapp, K. R." to "K. R. Knapp".

Gotcha. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 19:41, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Ditto with #15 and #17
Reference #36 is a dead link

Fixed. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 19:41, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

That should be it. Not too much or really anything major. I will be glad to pass once these things have been dealt with.--12george1 (talk) 17:40, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! Hope it's good now. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 19:41, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, this is good now. I will pass this article.--12george1 (talk) 20:10, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]