Talk:2004 Macau Grand Prix/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 16:15, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

Will review tonight. Courcelles (talk) 16:15, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

• " second identically timed session, took place" I think this comma is unnecessary
• "In the first practice session, Fábio Carbone set the fastest lap for ThreeBond Racing at two minutes and 15.216 seconds. " Makes it sound like he was the fastest on ThreeBond's team, not fastest overall.
• " it put him the lead on the approach to Mandarin Bend corner and held onto it at Lisboa turn." This sentence needs work.

• Not much wrong with this one, good work. Courcelles (talk) 00:30, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

• @Courcelles: Have made the necessary edits. Thanks once again for another review. MWright96 (talk) 06:20, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

• Anytime! Promoting. Courcelles (talk) 13:12, 23 July 2018 (UTC)