Talk:2003 Macau Grand Prix/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 16:38, 20 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I'll give this one a read-through now. Courcelles (talk) 16:38, 20 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"The overall winner was the driver who completed all 25 laps in the shortest amount of time possible." We can likely lose the word "possible" here.
What is a scholarship champion?
"avoided using new tyres in the closing seconds" How do you avoid using tires in a matter of seconds?
"In the second half an hour session" Needs the word 'practice'
"in the shortest amount of time possible" Again, the word possible is not needed.
" one of Piquet's shredded" One of his what shredded?
"front wing braking and launching into the" Do you mean breaking here?

Otherwise a solid read. Courcelles (talk) 17:00, 20 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Courcelles: All of the points raised above have been addressed. With your query about the scholarship champion. it was a title awarded to the best placed driver in machinery that was more than a year old in the British Formula 3 International Series. MWright96 (talk) 18:01, 20 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Interesting. Anyhow, Promoted. Courcelles (talk) 18:25, 20 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]