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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 22:12, 8 July 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall: Pass
- Pass/Fail:
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[edit]Lead
[edit]- Could
The championships were sponsored by cigarette manufacturer Embassy. A total prize fund of £1,615,770 was awarded at the event, with the winner receiving £260,000
be combined into one sentence?- I did try, but it all just looked weird. I've moved the sentence though. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:49, 13 July 2020 (UTC)
Second round
[edit]- Could the chiropractor claim be expanded a bit, like include a quote? Just seems odd to book an appointment when there's a tournament
- Added a quote - he was in quite a bit of pain. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:15, 15 July 2020 (UTC)
References
[edit]- Reference 7 doesn't support the sentence
- removed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:10, 13 July 2020 (UTC)
- Reference 12 doesn't support the sentence
- replaced Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:10, 13 July 2020 (UTC)
- Reference 13 doesn't support
the 25th consecutive time that the tournament was held at the venue
.- replaced. 19:10, 13 July 2020 (UTC)
- Reference 16 doesn't support the sentence and can probably be deleted anyways
- removed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:10, 13 July 2020 (UTC)
- Reference 19 is dead
- Replaced with the almaniac source. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:10, 13 July 2020 (UTC)
- Reference 31 is not formatted correctly
- Reformatted. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:23, 15 July 2020 (UTC)
- Are 3 references needed for the streaker claim?
- removed a ref. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:23, 15 July 2020 (UTC)
- Reference 39 doesn't support the sentence
- removed unsupported claim Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:23, 15 July 2020 (UTC)
- Reference 42, 49, and 50 need author (Saj Chowdhury)
- added Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:23, 15 July 2020 (UTC)
- Are 3 references needed for
Peter Ebdon reached the semi-finals for the second time, as he beat Hamilton 13–6
?- removed one of them. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:23, 15 July 2020 (UTC)
Notes
[edit]- Lee Vilenski, thank you for expanding this very interest tournament. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 00:17, 15 July 2020 (UTC)
- HickoryOughtShirt?4 - I've covered the above :). Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:24, 15 July 2020 (UTC)
- Lee Vilenski, passing. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 15:51, 15 July 2020 (UTC)
- HickoryOughtShirt?4 - I've covered the above :). Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:24, 15 July 2020 (UTC)