Talk:2002 Delphi Indy 300/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 13:43, 24 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will review this one . I hope this should be done in a week . Kpg jhp jm 13:43, 24 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

posing the fastest lap you meant posting .
after Helio Castroneves was overtaken by him can be reworded to after he overtook Hélio Castroneves

The sentence part of the Indy Racing League (IRL) 2002 can be reworded to part of the 2002 Indy Racing League (IRL) schedule . Kpg jhp jm 15:16, 26 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]
What happened to Foyt and who was Heam and for which team he drove ?
Link the redlinked Belterra Casino Indy 300 to Kentucky Indy 300 .

How can drivers run for 1 hour in a 30 minute session ?
If the slowest time meant the slowest between two laps of a driver , write slower or if it means the slowest time among all then write - driver with the slowest time failing to qualify.

Any source for the weather information ?
Who chose a front-wing change and why ?
Unser got ahead of de Ferran around the outside for fourth place at turn one on the 43rd lap. - when did de Ferran pass Unser ?
Too many mentions of the word de Ferran suggest replacing with his or him
I find weird that why people change front wings ? (Personal comment)
What is meant by crowding him . Kpg jhp jm 15:08, 28 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: Review done ! Kpgjhpjm 03:20, 29 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- @Kpgjhpjm: That should be all the above points done. MWright96 (talk) 07:59, 29 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  - @MWright96: One issue remains unaddressed - the third issue in the Race section. Kpgjhpjm 08:50, 29 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    - @Kpgjhpjm: That particular sentence has been rewritten and should be more clearer. MWright96 (talk) 09:44, 29 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]