Talk:2-Aminofluorene

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Review #1 Hello, Overall well written and informative Wikipedia page! However, there are a few things that caught my eye that could be added/fixed to make it even better. Within the text a little blip shows up in the form of "|right|DNA Damaged by carcinogenic 2-aminofluorene]]" which needs to be fixed. Other than that make sure to use in-text citations within the text and Chem Box of your sources in the proper format so as that one source is listed once even after using it multiple times. If you have done it correctly then is should appear as 1.^abc...etc.Matejew2 (talk) 15:57, 28 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Review #2 Hey, This looks like a great wikipedia page. One thing that I saw was you used in text citations with parentheses around them. You should look into how to use in text citations for wikipedia. I love the picture of the DNA strand. It really helps to visualize the concept. I think you could add more information in the chembox. Also in the first paragraph, you repeat the first sentence later in that paragraph. Very nice job so far though. Chemfox11 (talk) 01:24, 2 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Review #3 Hey! Nice job! The page looks really good. Matthew seems to have covered everything I saw. Add information to the subheadings or delete them if you don't plan on using them. Add in text citing and you should be alright. Good luck on the rest of the project! Emmakepple (talk) 01:07, 2 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]