Talk:1st Brigade, 7th Infantry Division (United States)/GA1

GA Review

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There's some confusion about the brigade numbers; they should be 13th and 14th. And clarify that the brigade HQs were not active from 1940 until the division was reorganized under ROAD. Other than that looks good. Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:52, 30 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed both. -Ed!^(talk) 02:05, 31 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

This sentence needs to be fixed on all 3 articles. By 1994, the garrison closed the Division subsequently relocated to Fort Lewis, Washington. And the other comments that I copied from the 3rd Brigade article: There's some confusion with tenses and stuff regarding the BRAC plan for the division and what actually happened. I think that the 2nd and 3rd Brigades formally deactivated in 1993 at Ft. Ord, while the division deactivated later. Is that correct? If so please clarify that in the article. Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:12, 31 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

How does it look now? -Ed!^(talk) 17:36, 31 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It would be nice so see listings of the brigade's OB at various points in time.
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars etc.:
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