Talk:1994 Gator Bowl/GA1
GA Review
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I usually find little wrong with your articles, but there's quite a few issues I had with this article, actually:
- Do a copyedit on the article. I fixed what mistakes I caught but there may have been some I missed this time.
- Roger that. I took a look through it and will do another after a short break.
- "Tech's offense suffered a handful of injuries prior to the Gator Bowl. Receiver Cornelius White fractured his patella while jogging." One person's not a handful - either add other injuries or reword.
- Reworded. I had intended to add more, but couldn't find sources for any.
- Don't start sentences with "but". I saw at least one.
- But I don't wanna! Fixed.
- Any Nielsen information available? I've seen that in your other articles but not this one.
- For the pre-BCS era, it's really tough to find that information. If you look at the 1993 Independence Bowl article and the other early Tech games, you won't find it there. If I manage to find a source, I'm more than happy to do that, but I don't have confidence in finding something like that.
- Double check the quarters to make sure players who appear there first and have articles are linked. I got the one in the offense/defense sections.
- "Branndon Stewart again played quarterback for the Volunteers," Not sure why but this part of the sentence feels off.
- Reworded.
- "That completion was followed by a nine-yard pass to Holmes" A first name's needed, since he's not mentioned elsewhere.
- Fixing this one drove me crazy because I was looking at the Tennessee roster instead of the Tech one. It's been fixed.
- What was VT's rank in the Coaches' poll prior to the game?
- For some reason, historical Coaches' poll rankings are really tough to find. If I can dig one up, I'll post it. Until then, I'd hesitate to put some unverified number up.
Otherwise, everything looks good. I'll put it on hold, you know what to do. Wizardman 18:57, 18 December 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! JKBrooks85 (talk) 01:05, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
- Alright, everything checks out, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman 20:14, 19 December 2008 (UTC)