Talk:1993 Football League Second Division play-off final/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:26, 13 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments (and suggest these are implemented, in principle, in the other GAN)

"while the teams placed from" -> "while those placed from"
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"table partook in play-off semi-finals; the winners of these semi-finals " -> "took part in play-offs; the winners of the play-off semi-finals..."
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"West Brom had" stick with formal names or introduce nicknames.
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Same for Vale.
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Link referee in lead.
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"The pivotal point of the match" a bit OR.
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Link sent off.
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"goals difference" -> "goal difference" and link.
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I would use the sports table module for the league, as seen in 1991 Football League Fourth Division play-off Final for example. Seems more accessible etc.
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"the first leg was" -> "first match of the two-legged tie.
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"Giant striker..." avoid such commentary.
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Play-off semifinal reports seem to be unreferenced.
Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"1992–93 season" I know it's red linked anyway, but put the "season" into the pipe.
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"tally of namesake" not really requied.
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"42,300 Baggies" don't use nicknames unless you explain them.
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"Vale showing patience and possession" according to?
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"a scissors kick" link.
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"by Ian Taylor tipped" overlink.
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"used his acrobatic skills" bit too commentatorish.
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Link foul.
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"dismissal" link.
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"third Englishman" what about non-Englishmen?
- The source didn't mention them.--Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"for the "Baggies" final goal" nickname
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"from six yards" convert.
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Could crop the Ardilles image so it doesn't leak down into the refs.
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- "£2 million" non-breaking space.
Done.--Echetus Xe 15:56, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"afterwards... my" non-breaking space before the ellpsis.
Done.--Echetus Xe 15:56, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"after barely surviving" can we be factual and explain what that really meant?
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"Red carded Peter Swan" not necessary, not even sure this sentence is required.
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think www and .com are needed for websites.
- Done.Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

THat's a first pass, I'll put it on hold while we deal with these and then do another run-through. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 10:22, 16 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

- Okay thanks, I've taken a crack at that.--Echetus Xe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I think this is good enough now for GA, I made a few cosmetic tweaks, so I'm happy to promote. I'll take a look at the other one of yours as well, perhaps you could pre-empt my review by considering some of the general points above on that article too? Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 06:58, 26 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]