Talk:1993 Finchley Road bombings/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:54, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"a travel agents" isn't just "a travel agent"?
"environment 1 mile north of the initial bombings in" comma after environment and bombings.
"1 mile" convert
"exploded four more bombs in north London, two exploded " exploded quickly repeated, perhaps detonated for the first?
"4 injuries" four.
"and was the first" doesn't really "run on". I would full stop after Howard and then "They were the first...
"Following the bombing, the" bombings.
"early 1993, the Northern Ireland peace process had just" overlinked.
"the IRA ceasefire in 1994" include IRA in the pipelink.
"in 1994.[3] In 1994" repetetive.
"on the 27 " no need for the.
"in Camden Town.[6] 18 people were" merge, which helpfully avoids starting sentence with a numeral.
"At 00:20 UTC, a telephone" add date in here now we're talking about the actual subject of the article.
"Society.[10][9] The" ref order.
"On the 2 October" no need for the.
"bomb could've been" avoid contractions.
File:1993 Finchley Road bombings artist's impression of blast subject.png please fill in the "n.a."s, these are not suitable justifications for non-free image usage.

Done. Feel free to highlight any other concerns. — Berrely • ^Talk∕_Contribs 17:50, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]