Talk:1992–93 South-West Indian Ocean cyclone season/GA1

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 03:24, 9 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

"The 1992–93 South-West Indian Ocean cyclone season lasted longer than normal, with the first storm Aviona forming on September&nbspo;27 and the final storm Konita not dissipating until May 7." see something wrong here with the non-breaking space? :P Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 03:24, 9 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

" Cyclone Colina formed and struck Réunion, which damaged houses and crops." how many? and any deaths? ~~it seems odd you mention it without giving any number of homes/crops damaged.~~ After reviewing it further, could you mention the 14 deaths instead of the damage? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 03:24, 9 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

That's what I get for pulling a TA and writing the lede before finishing the article. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 00:49, 10 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

"In mid-February, Tropical Storm Finella brought locally heavy rainfall to Réunion, reaching 1,074 mm (42.3 in) along the island's east coast and causing minimal rainfall along the southern coast." why mention it caused minimal rainfall along the southern coast if it was so minor? This article is about the season after all. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 03:24, 9 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

To highlight the unusual rainfall total. It's interesting IMO. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 00:49, 10 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Mention Ionia's impact in the lead. You're eager to put stuff for Colin and Finella, but not Ionia. Do you hate that name or something? :P Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 03:24, 9 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Nah, didn't know about the deaths when I wrote the lede. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 00:49, 10 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

"in the Australian region." what's that? I know, but some may not :P Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 03:24, 9 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

" In addition, the JTWC estimated the system attained 1 minute sustained peak winds of 120 km/h (75 mph) on September 28, the equivalent of a minimal hurricane. " could you mention this before it was named? Seems weird not being in order. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 03:24, 9 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Actually, I think it'd be more confusing mentioning the JTWC peak before it was named. It is slightly weird, but the storm wasn't named operationally until after the JTWC thought it was a hurricane equivalent. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 00:49, 10 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

" A circulation developed within the system on January 13 about 400 km (250 mi) southwest of Diego Garcia, and at that time it became a tropical disturbance." Delink Diego Garcia given you link it in a previous section. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 03:24, 9 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

"Dessilia produced wind gusts of 98 kilometres per hour (61 mph)." why is kmph spell out? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 03:24, 9 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Nothing in the newspapers, LN, or Google. Mind you, the rainfall was heaviest in the peaks, not in the civilized part. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 00:49, 10 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

" It was a small system, just 100 km (62 mi) from the Madagascar coast when it attained tropical storm status." round to the nearest 5 km. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 03:24, 9 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

"After passing about 50 km (31 mi) north of Juan de Nova island, " ditto. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 03:24, 9 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

" which was tied for the strongest system in the southern hemisphere in the cyclone year" what's that? I know what it is, but others amy not. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 03:24, 9 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Added a note. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 00

"Around that time, the convection began to wrap into the center," convection doesn't usually warp into the center, it wraps around the center. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 03:24, 9 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

No, it wraps into the center as well. That's what rainbands are. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 00:49, 10 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

"After the subtropical depression dissipated, there were three additional depressions before Tropical Cyclone Colina developed on January 11." Any info about them? Or do you what the reader to not know anything about them cause they were boring? :P Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 03:24, 9 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]