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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk) 02:32, 14 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • "Danny and Erika – existed without affecting land." - Erika affected land
  • "a buoy reported sustained winds of 38 mph (61 km/h) over a period of eight and a half minutes." - something isn't write; 38 mph is not tropical storm force winds.
  • "minimum pressure of 1007 mbar." - convert 1007 mbar to inHg
  • "Saffir-Simpson scale" - Saffir-Simpson Hurricane Scale
  • You should expand slightly on the impact in Canada; was there also heavy rain and rough seas?
  • "and a minimum pressure 944 mbar." - convert 944 mbar to inHg
  • "with winds of 135 mph (217 km/h)" - there is inconsistency between the infobox and what the conversion template show. I would just do it manually and write "135 mph (215 km/h)".
  • "Erika began a motion to the north and northeast." - I am not seeing any northerly motion. All I see is a northeastward direction.
  • "Shortly thereafter it passed through the Azores, moving directly over São Miguel Island." - This doesn't flow very well; I would re-word to "Shortly thereafter Erika passed through the Azores, it moved directly over São Miguel Island."
  • Judging by the summary of Fabian, it appears that it started out as a tropical storm and was never a tropical depression.
  • "including then-President of the United States George Bush's vacation home." - George Bush, which one? George H. W. Bush or George W. Bush?
  • There is no reference to the explanation of what ACE is, nor is there a source for the ACE values of the season.
  • A source is also needed for the storm names and to prove that the name Bob was retired.
  • Check again for name and date consistency in the references.

Thanks for the review. I believe I addressed all of the comments. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 14:54, 14 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, everything looks good! I will now be passing this article for GA. Congratulations,--12george1 (talk) 15:15, 14 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]