Talk:1988 Winter Olympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 15:24, 23 June 2013 (UTC)

At first glance, this needs minimal changes.

• I'm certain bookended is not a hyphenated word. Be sure to double check.
• C$270-million -- again, needs hyphenating?
• "The Olympic Oval was built on the campus of the University of Calgary and, required to protect against both the possibility of bitter cold temperatures and ice-melting chinook winds, was the first fully enclosed 400-metre speed skating venue in the word" reads a mouthful. Could it be split into two sentences?
• "The Canmore Nordic Centre was 90% funded by the Province of Alberta at a cost of $17.3 million", needs a ref.
• Ref 64 and 65 need locations (both are London).

No dabs or dead links, which is good to see. Consistent prose and comprehensive where need be – on hold for a week.

I've addressed all of your points. In the case of the Canmore Nordic Centre, ref 11 supports all three sentences related to the facility. Thanks for the review! Resolute 18:55, 23 June 2013 (UTC)

Happy to pass. :) Lemonade51 (talk) 19:16, 23 June 2013 (UTC)

Appreciated, thanks! Resolute 19:19, 23 June 2013 (UTC)