Talk:1978 FA Charity Shield/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:52, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
Will review this article as well. MWright96 (talk) 13:52, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead
[edit]- The reference in the lead is not necessarily required per MOS:LEADCITE since there are no quotes in it
- "Watched by 68,000," - Watched by a crowd of
- "Nottingham Forest took the lead in the tenth minute through Martin O'Neill and doubled their lead with a Peter Withe goal." - repetition of the word "lead"
- "Forest's lead was further extended through econd" - typo; should be spelt as second
Background and pre-match
[edit]- "Forest had won the league in the previous season, seven points clear of Liverpool and having been undefeated at home at the City Ground throughout the season." - repetition of the word "season" in the same sentence
- Please write out Forest and Ipswich in their full names since this will be the first time both clubs are mentioned in the prose
Summary
[edit]- Wikilink volley, corner, cross and free kick to their respective articles
- "Shilton made another "stunning" save to deny" - according to whom?
- "Good work from Robertson" - Not so sure what is being implied here. A little rewording would help explain exactly what Robertson did
- "Ipswich's George Burley waited too long fora pass" - for a
- "to take the ball and strike past" - strike it
Post-race
[edit]- Perhaps you could briefly state who Bobby Moore was
These were the issues that I found. Will put on hold for the time being. MWright96 (talk) 14:25, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
- MWright96 all done, thanks. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 16:04, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: Alrighty then. Will now promote to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 17:13, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
- MWright96 all done, thanks. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 16:04, 29 March 2020 (UTC)