Talk:1974 World Snooker Championship/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:40, 13 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 09:16, 7 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)}

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

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Lede

World Snooker Championship established - this needs to be split by a comma. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:36, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]
with £10,000 prize money. There were 31 entrants. - feels a bit dry. I'd merge this but into one sentence. Maybe The event featured 31 participants, with a total prize fund of £10,000. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:36, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Lede is a little lacking, maybe we could mention the prelim round. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:36, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

General

The format section doesn't actually cover how the format works. I.e. how the first round worked. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:02, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Added. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:28, 13 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Formatting for the sessions link is wrong. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:02, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:28, 13 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The article uses "qualifying" and "preliminary" interchangeably. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:02, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, it was called both in Snooker Scene. I've amended the one instance of "preliminary" to "qualifying". BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:28, 13 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Link respotted black Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:22, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]
hospital , where - stray space. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:22, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]
.[21][22]Cliff Thorburn led 3 - I think it was supposed to go here. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:22, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Amended per the three points above. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:28, 13 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Do we not have any images of anyone other than Reardon? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:22, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

There's an image of Higgins used in the infobox on his page, but I'm not entirely convinced it's a genuinely free image. There are much later images of Thorburn but he only reached the first round. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:28, 13 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Bennett,[27] eventually eliminating Bennett - repetitive. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:22, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:28, 13 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

sessions[28] Davis won the match 15–5.[29] - something is missing here. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:22, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Added a full stop after "sessions". BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:28, 13 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Link century break. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:22, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Added. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:54, 13 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

] At 8–8 the players were level, - well, duh. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:22, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:28, 13 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

One usage of Snooker Scene is in italics, the next in quotations. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:22, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:28, 13 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

As we state how many frames are in each round, we should also include sessions. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:22, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Added. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:28, 13 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I usually put the dates of the rounds as well. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:22, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Added. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:54, 13 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Williams. Williams - reword. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:22, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:54, 13 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-finals is a bit dry. Was there nothing more? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:22, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Snooker Scene only had about 100 words on Reardon v Davis, and about twice that on the other semi. Some of this is commentary like "somewhat characteristically started to miss badly when the pressure came on"; "three dull frames"; "a dreadful failure"; "romped away"; "inevitably approached a winning margin" that I didn't find very usable. I could add more like further break details, but I think the lack of anything much to say reflects the unspectacular nature of the decisive results. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:54, 13 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

There was a plate? I feel like that could have been mentioned in lede/format. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:22, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Added to lead. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:28, 13 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Review meta comments

I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 09:16, 7 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Many thanks, Lee Vilenski. I've amended the article and replied above. Let me know if anything else is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:57, 13 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.