Talk:1971 San Fernando earthquake/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 15:16, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 15:16, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
- Some Dude From North Carolina, Thanks for that. Take your time. Dawnseeker2000 19:30, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Couldn't find any issues with the infobox.
- I don't think the word "extraordinary" is neutral to use, so try replacing it. Done I've replaced extraordinary with unprecedented. Maybe that will sound more in line with neutral wording.
- Other than that, the lead looks good.
Tectonic setting
[edit]- Remove the comma after "Channel Islands offshore". Done
Earthquake
[edit]- Add a serial comma after "east–west strike". Done
- I don't think "landsliding" is an actual word, so reword. Done
- Add a comma after "the Tujunga segment". Done
- "frequently-encountered" → "frequently encountered" Done
Damage
[edit]- "heart attack" → "heart attacks" Done
- Is "proper ties" the correct words being used, or is it a typo? Done Yes, it's correct. I've linked Tie (engineering) to assist the reader.
- "The large" → "A large" Done
- Remove the comma after "closest school to Pacoima dam". Done
Aftermath
[edit]- Add a comma after "Long Beach earthquake". Done
- "debate began" → "a debate began" Done
References
[edit]- Sources are archived and well-cited.
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