Talk:1944 Cuba–Florida hurricane/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 03:38, 12 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I was going to see if someone else would review this. But it's been more than two weeks and no takers yet. So I guess I will review this now--12george1 (talk) 03:38, 12 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"a normalization of landfalling storms based on 2018 demographics suggested that an equivalent storm in 2018 would rank among the costliest U.S. hurricanes with a damage toll approaching that of Hurricane Sandy." - Can you re-write that so that 2018 isn't mentioned twice? I also think this could be a sentence by itself
"effects remains unclear due a dearth of conclusive reports from" - due to a dearth
Cayman Islands, Cuba, and List of Category 4 Atlantic hurricanes are wikilinked multiple times in the lead section. It's also possible to wikilink landfall earlier than you did
Barometric pressure is wikilinked twice in the MH
"10–15 mi (16–24 km) west of Havana, Cuba before emerging" - Comma after Cuba
"As it did so, the storm began to become more barolinic, transitioning into a" - baroclinic
"considered the most threatening hurricane for the island nation in 16 years." - "16 years" is wikilinked to the 1926 Havana–Bermuda hurricane. That was 18 years before 1944, not 16
The titles of two references are written in all caps
"Henry, Morgenthau Jr. (October 23, 1944). - That should be Morgenthau Jr., Henry
There are four references for the Orlando Reporter-Star. Three of them incorrectly state that Miami, Florida, is the publication location

That should be it. Nice work overall--12george1 (talk) 03:38, 12 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@12george1: Appreciate the review and comments. I made adjustments in accordance with all points raised. As for the 16 years remark, that was actually meant to be 18 years so I changed that and kept the link. Cheers, --TheAustinMan^{(Talk ⬩ Edits)} 04:19, 12 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Wow, that was quick. I see that you've done everything. So I will now pass this article and list it as a GA--12george1 (talk) 04:36, 12 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]