Talk:1930 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1
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Reviewer: Cloudchased (talk · contribs) 01:36, 6 July 2014 (UTC)
Hey, GC, I'll take this one. Cloudchased (talk) 01:36, 6 July 2014 (UTC)
- I took care of most of my concerns in this edit; feel free to check for accuracy/make objections. There were a few amusing errors. :P
- I'm fine with the revisions made--12george1 (talk) 01:43, 6 July 2014 (UTC)
- Just one thing: In the section for TS Three, you mention the effects of cool-air advection twice. Care to clarify?
- Fixed.--12george1 (talk) 01:43, 6 July 2014 (UTC)
Nice work overall! Cloudchased (talk) 01:36, 6 July 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review, Cloudchased. :) --12george1 (talk) 01:43, 6 July 2014 (UTC)