Talk:1921 Georgia Tech Golden Tornado football team/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 15:27, 1 December 2017 (UTC)

You've waited long enough to get this article reviewed so it shall be done. MWright96 (talk) 15:27, 1 December 2017 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• Grant Field, New York and William Alexander are redirect links that need tending to. Also there is the same issue present with the first and third links mentioned in the infobox.
• "compiling an 8–1 record (5–0 against SIAA teams)" I think that is would be better written as {{xt|compling an 8-1 record (5-0 against Southern Intercollegiate Athletic Association (SIAA) teams)
• Wikilink Rushed to Rush (gridiron football) to help non-football readers

Before the season

• Defense is a redirect link that should be fixed to American football#Defensive unit. A similar issue is present with broken jaw along with the playing positions line, end and guards
• The entire first paragraph in this sub-section is lacking a reference

Wake Forest

• Add a link to shutout which goes to Shutout#American football

Furman

• "Judy Harlan's work as a defensive back was praised." -try this Judy Harlan received praised for his work as a defensive back.

Clemson

• "Brewster also scored the next touchdown" - fourth

Championships

• Explain who Fuzzy Woodruff was
• "though "no championship was ever won with less effort or achievement." - this quote must be referenced

Overall you have made a good piece of work with only the minor copy-edits I have raised above to be addressed. Going to put this review on hold.

• Think I covered them all. Thank you for this. I dig the images in this one. Cake (talk) 06:32, 2 December 2017 (UTC)

• • @MisterCake: Lovely. Am now going to give this article the GA symbol. MWright96 (talk) 07:35, 2 December 2017 (UTC)