Talk:1921 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 14:18, 2 March 2019 (UTC)

Will get to later this weekend. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 14:18, 2 March 2019 (UTC)

• "The 1921 Atlantic hurricane season featured the Tampa Bay hurricane, the most recent major hurricane to strike the Tampa Bay Area in Florida. " why mention Tampa Bay twice? I feel like you could accomplish the same goal in just one sentence ie "The 1921 Atlantic hurricane season featured the most recent major hurricane to strike the Tampa Bay Area in Florida. " YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 00:01, 20 March 2019 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:56, 21 March 2019 (UTC)

• "The strongest hurricane of the season, the Tampa Bay hurricane, peaked as a low-end Category 4 with winds of 140 mph (220 km/h). Throughout Florida, the hurricane left about $10 million (1921 USD) in damage and eight deaths." why the tampa Bay bit? It's not something we usually do. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 00:01, 20 March 2019 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:56, 21 March 2019 (UTC)

• "Late on June 17, the storm made landfall in northern Belize with winds of 50 mph (85 k" link to landfall(meteorology). YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 00:01, 20 March 2019 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:56, 21 March 2019 (UTC)

• "Rough seas caused a barge with 18,000 gallons of oil to capsize at Port Aransas." metric conversion to liters? YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 00:01, 20 March 2019 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:56, 21 March 2019 (UTC)

• "Parts of Texas observed high winds. The highest reported sustained wind speed was 68 mph (109 km/h) at Corpus Christi. " mind combining these two sentences? YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 00:01, 20 March 2019 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:56, 21 March 2019 (UTC)

• "Hurricane San Pedro of 1921" I'm mostly sure having this in bold goes against the MOS. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 00:01, 20 March 2019 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:56, 21 March 2019 (UTC)

• "However, by three hours later, the hurricane transitioned into an extratropical cyclone about 400 mi (640 km) southeast of Newfoundland. " you can likely shorten this a bit via "Three hours later, however, the hurricane transitioned into an extratropical cyclone about 400 mi (640 km) southeast of Newfoundland." YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 00:01, 20 March 2019 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:56, 21 March 2019 (UTC)

• "The storm caused extensive damage to buildings in Puerto Rico and Bermuda,[" how does a storm cause "extensive" damage to a small island? YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 00:01, 20 March 2019 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:56, 21 March 2019 (UTC)

• "The Great Tampa Bay Hurricane of 1921" see above, plus great is on the WOW IIRC. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 00:01, 20 March 2019 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:56, 21 March 2019 (UTC)

• "This storm was not included in the Atlantic hurricane best track until 2009."some context to the Atlantic hurricane re-analysis project would be good. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 00:01, 20 March 2019 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 02:43, 22 March 2019 (UTC)

I'm done with everything. Thanks for the review! Must have been a really long weekend :P --12george1 (talk) 03:56, 21 March 2019 (UTC)