Talk:1920 Georgia Tech Golden Tornado football team/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 12:27, 22 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

"Halfback Red Barron and fullback Judy Harlan were also renowned." - Please clarify what the two players were renowned for.

"and Pitt was considered lucky to have won." - considered by whom?
"Pitt fullback Orville Hewitt injured Tech quarterback Jack McDonough's ankle, and Frank Ferst had to take his place for the rest of the season." - needs a citation

"Sportswriter Morgan Blake had this to say of Flowers' play against Auburn:" - Sportswriter Morgan Blaken said about the Flowers' play against Auburn:
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These are the points I discovered during my read. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 14:11, 22 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I think that is the lot. Curses that I cannot find another link for reference 36, but I did add something to show Fincher knocked McMillin out. Also, I put "during the First World War", but have changed it anyway. Cake (talk) 15:56, 22 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]