Talk:1920 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 22:53, 4 December 2015 (UTC)

• Where is the section for the TD?

• Added--12george1 (talk) 17:37, 8 December 2015 (UTC)

• "Across the Gulf Coast, damage from the storm totaled to $1.45 million (1920 USD) and one death was associated with the hurricane." - poor grammar. Switch order maybe?

• Better?--12george1 (talk) 17:37, 8 December 2015 (UTC)

• "Inland, a house Wilmington was blown " - eh?

• I forgot a word--12george1 (talk) 17:37, 8 December 2015 (UTC)

• "This storm was not operationally tracked in real time, but was later added to HURDAT." - why? What caused them to upgrade?

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 17:37, 8 December 2015 (UTC)

• For H5 - " Turning south-southwestward" - not according to the map

• I know my compass points. I got my orienteering merit badge. But unfortunately I type the wrong direction sometimes :P --12george1 (talk) 17:37, 8 December 2015 (UTC)

• " Low lands along the coast were inundated by storm surge and heavy rains, peaking at 8 in (203.2 mm), flooded croplands, causing substantial damage to the fruit industry." - I'd split everything after the rainfall total. That'll make it clearer.

• Better?--12george1 (talk) 17:37, 8 December 2015 (UTC)

All in all a good read! ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 22:53, 4 December 2015 (UTC)