Talk:1916 Virgin Islands hurricane/GA1

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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 20:45, 1 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"The 1916 Virgin Islands hurricane was a Category 3 tropical cyclone" Saffir Simpson didn't exist yet
Could you elaborate on who discovered the information about the storm's formative stages since you said not much was known in the lead.
"produced heavy rainfall; at Charlotte Amalie, the storm's rainfall total in 24 hours" Was the amount specified?
"lesser montary" small typo here
"Many residents of across the Danish West Indies" I would remove "of"
When you discuss the junior surgeon being sent, I assume you mean the HMS ship. It isn't exactly clear here since you just discussed another vessel.
I would also include note 2 at the mention of damage in the aftermath

Again, another great article... I found just a few issues with it that should be easy to address. Noah^Talk 20:45, 1 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Hurricane Noah: thanks for the review and comments. Hope you found the article a good read. I've implemented the suggested changes. As for the Charlotte Amalie rainfall total, that was not specified. —TheAustinMan^{(Talk ⬩ Edits)} 16:06, 2 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]