Talk:1912 Jamaica hurricane/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: CycloneIsaac (talk · contribs) 03:28, 28 September 2016 (UTC)

I'll review it over the weekend.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 03:28, 28 September 2016 (UTC)

• Isn't Cuba one of the areas impacted? It should be in the infobox.
• "However, several banana plantations reported losses as high at 60% individually. The United Fruit Company sustained heavy losses due to the damage to banana trees." Can this sentence be merged?
• "Conditions on the island worsened as the hurricane neared the coast, as railway lines were heavily damaged by the winds and rain." Probably shouldn't use "as" multiple times in a sentence.

That's all I've got for now in terms of prose.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 04:33, 24 October 2016 (UTC)

• Fixed all of those. Thanks for reviewing--12george1 (talk) 01:05, 1 November 2016 (UTC)