Talk:1897 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1

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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 18:51, 4 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I guess I'll review this since you reviewed mine :)

"The first system, Hurricane One," - since "Hurricane One" isn't really a name, I don't think you need to mention it here.

Removed--12george1 (talk) 19:31, 4 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Why do you mention knots in the lede with regards to ACE?

Removed--12george1 (talk) 19:31, 4 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

You should mention H1's extratropical history lasting until September 10

Done--12george1 (talk) 19:31, 4 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

You say that H1's rough seas capsized the ship in the lede, but don't mention it in the section. Why not?

It is mention in the section. "The crew of the barkentine St. Peter reported that another ship capsized with 45 men aboard; all of them drowned.[4][5]"--12george1 (talk) 19:31, 4 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

"No impact was reported in the Florida Keys." - source?

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 04:46, 5 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

New England impact for TS 3?

Couldn't find anything for New England. :( --12george1 (talk) 19:31, 4 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

TS 4 caused some deaths per NHC

Ok, but what should I do? There isn't a specific total mentioned.--12george1 (talk) 19:31, 4 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

More info about the Triton here, including survivors. The captain apparently committed suicide when he heard the ship was sinking. Here is a list of news sources from October 1897 containing "Triton"

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 04:46, 5 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

"The system weakened while crossing the island" - say Cuba here since it's a new paragraph

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 04:46, 5 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Any reason you didn't use the Monthly Weather Review? It has some more info on storms five and six

Better?--12george1 (talk) 04:46, 5 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

The writing is generally decent, but I think it's a little lacking on the comprehensive front. Fix these and I'll be happy to pass. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 18:51, 4 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]