Talk:1896 East Coast hurricane/GA1
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Reviewer: TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contribs) 02:16, 1 March 2017 (UTC)
- "The hurricane did $200,000 in damage to coastal installations on New York's Coney Island." - Can we find a better word than "did"? (That's rhetorical, replace it nao)
- I've been trying to find different ways to say that based on your suggestions, but a recent edit from Dank, one of the most experienced copyeditors on the project, seems to indicate that it's perfectly cromulent to say "the storm did damage." – Juliancolton | Talk 03:23, 1 March 2017 (UTC)
- "and overall damage amounted to $500,000." Boi we go through this every time. State 1896 USD.
- I added the 1896 thing to the first in-prose dollar value. – Juliancolton | Talk 03:23, 1 March 2017 (UTC)
- "An apparent tornado north of the storm's track damaged destroyed a home and an outbuilding." - North of the storm's track could mean anywhere from a hair north of its landfall point to the North Pole. Specify where, unless it's not listed (I didn't check).
- The location is noted as "Lake Butler" north of the storm's track in Florida, but there are a number of places named Lake Butler that fit the bill, and I don't have anything else to go by. I could say as much in the article if you think it would help things. – Juliancolton | Talk 03:23, 1 March 2017 (UTC)
- "Northeasterly gales and high tides affected northeastern portions of the state" - Ain't nobody know the definition of a gale, link it.
- Linked. – Juliancolton | Talk 03:23, 1 March 2017 (UTC)
- "...while severe damage was reported in Virginia Beach." - What kind of damage?
- Added a bit more for Virginia Beach. – Juliancolton | Talk 03:23, 1 March 2017 (UTC)
- Halifax is a disambig link.
- Undisambigulated. – Juliancolton | Talk 03:23, 1 March 2017 (UTC)
Rest looks nice. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 02:16, 1 March 2017 (UTC)
- As always, thanks for the review. I'm glad you didn't find any major issues. – Juliancolton | Talk 03:23, 1 March 2017 (UTC)