Talk:1872 FA Cup final/GA1
GA Review
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Reviewer: GaryColemanFan (talk) 16:45, 21 November 2009 (UTC)
This article is very well written and appears to met most of the criteria. I have a few minor comments:
Route to the final:
- "crack Scottish club" - I'm not sure what is meant by "crack" - could a wikilink be used?
- It really means just "leading/top/best" in UK vsports vernacular, but I'll reword it so that people don't think they were on drugs
Summary:
- "extremely attaacking strategy" - seems like awkward phrasing
- reworded
- "coin toss" - could use a wikilink
- I think it's a pretty common term, but wl added nonetheless
- "acute angle" - could use a wikilink
- As above
- "handled" - could use a wikilink
- Done
Details
- It has been a while since I reviewed a football match article. Can the details (attendance, lineups for the teams, referee, etc.) be sourced?
- Done
Post-match:
- "Mr" - a very trivial detail, but is it standard in British English to not use a period/full-stop at the end of this abbreviation?
- Yes
I will place it on hold to allow for responses. Any questions or comments can be left here, as this page is on my watchlist. GaryColemanFan (talk) 16:45, 21 November 2009 (UTC)
- Many thanks for your comments, all addressed I think -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:23, 22 November 2009 (UTC)
- Looks good. I am promoting the article. Thanks for the quick replies. One thing: I forgot to check the article for disambiguation links when I was doing the review. In the discussion of Cresswell in the "Summary" section, there was a link to Winger, which I changed to Winger (sports). If this is incorrect, the link might need to be fixed. GaryColemanFan (talk) 15:36, 22 November 2009 (UTC)