Talk:177th Fighter Aviation Regiment PVO/GA1
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 02:23, 20 December 2017 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:23, 20 December 2017 (UTC)
- No DABs, external links OK.
- Images appropriately licensed.
- an aviation regiment of the Soviet Air Defense Forces Fighter needs to be linked somewhere in the lede, so change aviation to fighter and link it here.
- Link interceptor, squadron, flight, Lenino station, political officer, ace, Warsaw, Anju, fighter-bomber, bomber
- Always identify what kind of aircraft it is on first reference. Forex Ju 88 bomber, etc. And add manufacturer as well. Forex Lockheed F-80 Shooting Star.
- regiment received a squadron of 15 pilots from Should probably rephrase as "received 15 pilots as reinforcements from..." unless they came over as a complete squadron. If they did, what happened to the other squadrons, were they disbanded?
- This was a complete squadron of MiG-3 qualified pilots, I believe, based on my interpretation of the cited Osprey book, presumably transferred to the 177th to assist with the conversion to the MiG-3. According to Bykov's IAP book, the 27th had begun receiving MiG-3s before late July. Kges1901 (talk) 02:54, 30 December 2017 (UTC)
- Makes sense.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:09, 30 December 2017 (UTC)
- What were the designations of the squadrons?
- Squadrons of aviation regiments were designated 1st, 2nd and 3rd Aviation Squadrons, and so on. Kges1901 (talk) 02:54, 30 December 2017 (UTC)
- Link all ranks on first use.
- main People's Liberation Army Navy at Dalian. Missing word?
- What kind of external tanks?
- Indicate what country the airbases were in in the Korean War section.
- Sabre pilot supercharging his engine Impossible to supercharge a turbine. What do you mean here?
- Rephrased. Kges1901 (talk) 12:33, 30 December 2017 (UTC)
- three squadrons fought in 24 January engagement with around Missing words?
- Rephrased. Kges1901 (talk) 02:54, 30 December 2017 (UTC)
- disbanded during the reform of the Russian Air Force Awkward, try "disbanded during the reformation of the Russian Air Force"--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:46, 30 December 2017 (UTC)
- I think that squadron is the only needed link that you forgot. Take care of that and we'll be done here.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:43, 30 December 2017 (UTC)