Talk:1689 Boston revolt/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Canadian Paul 00:43, 19 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I will be reviewing this article in the near future, hopefully on Thursday. Canadian Paul 00:43, 19 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

A great article, just some small issues here:

Under "Aftermath": "Andros was moved from Usher's house to Fort Mary after it fell into rebel hands on the 19th." It is technically unclear here whether "it" refers to Usher's house or Fort Mary... replacing that word with "the former" or "the latter" would clarify things.
Since this is an article about the United States, shouldn't the dates be in American date order? I'm always getting it muddled when it comes to these things, so feel free to slap me with the relevant directive on this one...

I am going to put the article on hold for a period of up to seven days so that changes can be made. I'm always open to discussion, so if you think I'm wrong on something leave your thoughts here and we'll discuss. I'll be checking this page at least daily, unless something comes up in real life, so you can be sure I'll notice any comments left here. Canadian Paul 03:30, 22 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Well, the article was originally written in dmy format, so I just kept it that way because I'm not fussy. Since there are relatively few dates, I've switched them to mdy. I've also clarified Andros' transfer. Magic♪piano 19:29, 22 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Alrighty then! Everything looks great, so I will be passing this as a Good Article. Congratulations and thank you for your hard work! Canadian Paul 02:26, 23 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]