Talk:14th Street Tunnel shutdown/GA1
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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 14:00, 13 April 2020 (UTC)
Opening statement
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Removed, followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. —♠Vami_IV†♠ 14:00, 13 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Epicgenius: Hi again. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 14:00, 13 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Vami IV: Thanks for the quick review. I have resolved these issues. epicgenius (talk) 16:00, 13 April 2020 (UTC)
Background
[edit]Combine the parts of "Background" that deal with the damage caused by Hurricane Sandy into Paragraph 1, and those that deal with the immediate aftermath into Paragraph 2.In October 2012, Hurricane Sandy caused severe damage to New York City,
Should ideally launch intoThe storm flooded nine of the system's 14 underwater tunnels [...] and completely destroyed a portion of the IND Rockaway Line (A train) in Queens, [...].
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Elaborate on this years of needed repairs.- Done The repairs were staggered over several years.
Planning
[edit]- <s.Citation [6] is repeated three times without need in the first paragraph of "Closure options".
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between Bedford Avenue in Brooklyn and Eighth Avenue in Manhattan
Specify that "Bedford Avenue" and "Eighth Avenue" here are stations and not the streets.- Done
The L train needs a wikilink.- Done
and running the M to [...] G, J/Z and M [...] of the G would [...] The M's peak [...] except for the A and R would [...] The J/Z and M would [...] The G would also [...] the G would not [...] suspended L service
Expand with the word "train"/"trains".- Done
and East Village, Manhattan,
Consider "the East Village".- Done
Lorimer Street (J and M trains),
Redundant link to the M train here.- Rearranged
The SBS, NYCDOT, NYCEDC acronyms are not explained.- Done
speeded up transit times
sped up- Done
transit times for transit riders
Delete one of these "transits".- Done
January 6, 2019, three months before the tunnel is set to shut down
This should not be present-tense.- Done
Free transfers will be available
If this is supposed to be present-tense, use "are". If not, "would".- Done this was in the past tense. epicgenius (talk) 16:00, 13 April 2020 (UTC)
ferry and two Select Bus Service routes [...] the L5 will not be a Select Bus Service route
Redundant links for SBS.- Done Also, I trimmed this a bit since the route was not implemented.
analysis of possible effect
the possible effect- Done
What's a benchwall?
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The busway would have the same vehicle restrictions as originally planned: the only vehicles that could use the busway would be buses, trucks making deliveries on 14th Street, emergency and Access-A-Ride vehicles, and local traffic traveling for no more than one block.
Nothing after the colon here is required.- Done
However, the busway was not implemented as scheduled in July 2019.[94][95] The implementation of the busway was pushed back to August,[96][97] before finally taking effect on October 3, 2019.[98][99]
Condense.- Done
GA progress
[edit]Images are relevant and free, though few in number. Article passes copyvio scanning with 23% likelihood. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 14:00, 13 April 2020 (UTC)
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