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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:46, 10 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • "Barge 115,[1] No.115,[1] or Whaleback 115[2]) " all these are ref'd in the article so no need for the refs here.
  • Done.
  • No need to link "American".
  • Done.
  • "115 was built..." -> "She was built..."
  • Done.
  • "August in 1891," no need for "in"
  • Done.
  • "She was a whaleback" you said that in the intro sentence.
  • Done.
  • Non-breaking spaces between times and "a.m." "p.m."
  • Done.
  • "between 40 feet (12.2 m) and 80 feet (24.4 m) of water" don't we normally say "'at a depth of"?
  • Done.
  • You can relink in the main body, so "whaleback" can be linked in the first main section.
  • Done.
  • "widely accepted" what do you mean by this?
Changed to "unpopular".
  • "US official number #53268" link and no need to use #, you already say number.
  • Done.
  • What is "downbound"?
  • "an unrigged barge" barge is overlinked and what is "unrigged"?
  • Done.
  • No need to link "candle".
  • Done.
  • "Ryan LeBlanc" introduce him. Is he notable?
  • I don't believe he is.
  • None of the navboxes seem to mention 115.
  • Which navbox?

That's it, on hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 16:40, 12 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]