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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:46, 10 March 2021 (UTC)
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- "Barge 115,[1] No.115,[1] or Whaleback 115[2]) " all these are ref'd in the article so no need for the refs here.
- Done.
- No need to link "American".
- Done.
- "115 was built..." -> "She was built..."
- Done.
- "August in 1891," no need for "in"
- Done.
- "She was a whaleback" you said that in the intro sentence.
- Done.
- Non-breaking spaces between times and "a.m." "p.m."
- Done.
- "between 40 feet (12.2 m) and 80 feet (24.4 m) of water" don't we normally say "'at a depth of"?
- Done.
- You can relink in the main body, so "whaleback" can be linked in the first main section.
- Done.
- "widely accepted" what do you mean by this?
- Changed to "unpopular".
- "US official number #53268" link and no need to use #, you already say number.
- Done.
- What is "downbound"?
- Sorted. Linked to Glossary of nautical terms
- "an unrigged barge" barge is overlinked and what is "unrigged"?
- Done. Linked to Rigging (material handling).
- Link dry dock.
- Done.
- No need to link "candle".
- Done.
- "Ryan LeBlanc" introduce him. Is he notable?
- I don't believe he is.
- None of the navboxes seem to mention 115.
- Which navbox?
That's it, on hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 16:40, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: I just got a message saying my article has been listed. Is that correct? GreatLakesShips (talk) 18:47, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
- Sorry, my mistake. It's on hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 18:50, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: Aside from the navbox, all is done. GreatLakesShips (talk) 19:16, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
- GreatLakesShips The three "incident/shipwreck" templates at the bottom of the page - I don't seem to see this article mentioned in any of them? The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 20:19, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: All done. Thanks for reviewing. GreatLakesShips (talk) 21:41, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
- Alrighty then, let's try that promotion again! The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 21:43, 12 March 2021 (UTC)