Talk:10th Mountain Division/GA1

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First opinions, Most of the info seems to have come from Self-published sources,like Fort Drum Public Affairs Office . Self-published sources are largely not acceptable.
- Per my other GA articles, this has never been a problem at the GA level. At A-class, yes, but it's never prevented promotion in a GA article, per 95th Infantry Division (United States), 100th Infantry Division (United States), and others. —Ed!^(talk) 02:36, 15 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
The title of the subsection "legacy" is inappropriate since the unit is still active. Suggest split into "In popular media" and "Alumni" sections.
- Done. —Ed!^(talk) 02:36, 15 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
The Article seems well referenced and well written
IS the redlinked Panama Canal Division the same as Panama Canal Division (United States)? Please check all redlinks for spelling and articles in different spellings
- Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 02:36, 15 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Request authors to do another redlink check for the remaining redlinks.Do not remove any, just check once.--Vinay84 (talk) 06:44, 16 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Done. As far as I can tell, all of those subjects don't yet have an article on Wikipedia. —Ed!^(talk) 00:06, 18 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Lot of single sentence paragraphs especially in the initial sections.See if they can be merged or expanded.--Vinay84 (talk) 06:58, 16 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Merged most of these sentences. —Ed!^(talk) 00:06, 18 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

File:U.S. Army soldier securing site - Parun, Nuristan - 06-27-2007.jpg in Initial deployments section has a delete alert.
- Replaced image with another copy without the notice. —Ed!^(talk) 00:06, 18 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Some statements need citation and have been marked in the article. --Vinay84 (talk) 06:30, 17 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Which ones? I can't find any "citation needed" templates. —Ed!^(talk) 00:06, 18 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

It is a subordinate unit of the XVIII Airborne Corps and the only division-sized element of the US Army to specialize in fighting under harsh terrain and weather conditions. Move the statement into the article proper and give a reference.
- Done. That statement is reiterated in the "Organization" section, with a ref. —Ed!^(talk) 16:55, 18 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

There are dead links :E.g. Lineage and Honors of the 10th Mountain Division and 4th Brigade Combat Team Website . Check the links and references and if possible update them.
Since you already have Fort Drum website among the references, there eis no need for it again in Eternal Links