Talk:(sic)nesses

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(sic)nesses has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.

Article milestones
Date	Process	Result
October 29, 2010	Peer review	Reviewed
March 4, 2011	Good article nominee	Listed

Current status: Good article

Request

(sic)nesses requires more information. First, I would like a volunteer to complete the Credits/Personnel section of the article by adding the Director, Producers etc. Kevon100 ^Talk! _{If you're ❺❺❺ then I'm ❻❻❻} 14:06, 19 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

~~Sure, i'll help you out.~~ Done as you requested, if there are any mistakes fix them ofcourse! Grey Matter (talk) 14:16, 19 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Done Thank you Grey Matter Kevon100 ^Talk! _{If you're ❺❺❺ then I'm ❻❻❻} 17:13, 19 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Charts

Another request, several websites including this have stated (sic)nesses charted in other nations in the Top 5 and Top 10. While I was only able to find that it charted at No. 3 in Germany, I am having difficulties in finding the other charts. Help will be appreciated if the other charts can be found and added to the article. Thank you in Advance. Kevon100 ^Talk! _{If you're ❺❺❺ then I'm ❻❻❻} 17:02, 19 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Topic

The topic on the discography will be demoted if this is not GANed before Dec 27. Nergaal (talk) 22:24, 10 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:(sic)nesses/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 07:24, 2 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I fixed a dab link (audio mixing → Live sound mixing ) please check
ELs are clean

"The double-disc release features a recording of their headlining performance at the 2009 Download Festival along with a 45-minute behind the scenes documentary created by percussionist Shawn Crahan, and the four music videos from All Hope Is Gone." - comma after Festival, and link music video

Fixed CrowzRSA 02:00, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

"and it included free giveaways" - not mentioned later

Fixed CrowzRSA 02:00, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

If you are going to mention individual reviews in the lead I think you should cite them here.

Why? they're not quotations, and quotes are generally the only things required to have references in the lead.

Expand the lead to include charts

Done CrowzRSA 02:00, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Release date and genres are in infobox, but not in body

I added the release date, but isn't the genre explained in American heavy metal band Slipknot? CrowzRSA 02:00, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

OK, leave heavy metal there, but I suggest removing nu metal, and alternative metal. And the release date still is not in the body. Adabow (talk · contribs) 03:33, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

There have been SEVERAL discussions on whether putting genres like nu metal and alternative metal and it always comes down to weather or not sources list them as that genre, and allmusic refers to most of the songs (both live and studio) to be either nu metal or alternative metal, and the whole (sic)nesses page ([1]) lists it as heavy metal.

OK, but what about the release info? Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:27, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I added it to the lead; (sic)nesses is the fourth video album by American heavy metal band Slipknot, released on September 28, 2010. CrowzRSA 22:29, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

And your source? Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:31, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Added source. CrowzRSA 22:44, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Not good to start the body with "It"

Fixed CrowzRSA 02:00, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comma after "Shawn Crahan stated that"

Fixed CrowzRSA 02:00, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Indicate that Gray was a member of the band

Done CrowzRSA 02:00, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Link MSN

Done CrowzRSA 02:00, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

"Shawn Crahan attended the New York event" - don't need his first name again

Fixed CrowzRSA 02:00, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Album title in Crahan's quote should be italicised

Fixed CrowzRSA 02:00, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

"The DVD was released on September 28, 2010 sold 9,300 copies" - missing word

Fixed CrowzRSA 02:00, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Link and italicse Billboard

I removed the sentence (see below for explanation) CrowzRSA 02:00, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Why are other charts not mentioned in prose?

I removed the sentence, as all of the chart positions can be found in the "Charts and certifications" section. CrowzRSA 02:00, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I would recommend that you summarise the charts in prose. If you rally don't want to, then move Charts and certifications to a level three header under reception. Adabow (talk · contribs) 03:33, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

As is, there really isn't enough information on the entry date and entry position and stuff, so the prose would be very bland… I think in the future the sites will update it to include that stuff, but that may be way off. CrowzRSA 21:16, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Would the music videos not start at chapter 19?

The DVD doesn't list them as 19-22. I figured that it was intended that they were separate track listings, and that they deserved separate number listings… CrowzRSA 02:00, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

How about "legal names" instead of "real names"?

Fixed CrowzRSA 02:00, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Is there a reason that the band members are in descending order? Ascending would seem more logical.

Fixed CrowzRSA 02:00, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Italicise album title whenever it occurs

I fixed everything in the body and all, but left the reference titles alone. CrowzRSA 02:00, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The Charts and certifications table is a bit confusing, as it kinda implies that the Top Music Video Chart is responsible for the certification, when Billboard do not have anything to do with certs

Fixed CrowzRSA 02:00, 3 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

On hold now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 07:24, 2 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I am satisfied with improvements. Passing now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:48, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, CrowzRSA 16:13, 6 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Dead link

During several automated bot runs the following external link was found to be unavailable. Please check if the link is in fact down and fix or remove it in that case!

http://www.discogs.com/Slipknot-sicnesses-Live-At-Download/release/2465940%7Ctitle=
- In (sic)nesses on 2011-05-20 21:24:35, 404 Not Found
- In (sic)nesses on 2011-05-31 04:27:07, 404 Not Found

--JeffGBot (talk) 04:27, 31 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Disc 1

Can anyone confirm that disc 1 contains a Paul Gray interview because I bought the DVD and can't find it at all.--Jacoblikesmetal (talk) 11:36, 9 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]