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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 16:25, 4 March 2012 (UTC) Hello, I will be reviewing this article. Aaron • You Da One 16:25, 4 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Infobox

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  • Provide an alt parameter explaining the coverart's content.
 Done - Saulo Talk to Me 23:24, 27 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Use {{start date|1999|08|23}}
 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 23:24, 27 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Use {{duration|m=3|s=16}}
 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 23:24, 27 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • No need to write out the full names again the in Producer parameter, surnames will suffice.
 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 23:24, 27 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • Can you say who wrote the song in addition to who produced it?
 Done - Saulo Talk to Me 16:42, 31 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • You say R&B and rock in the lead, but only R&B in the info box?
 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 16:42, 31 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • The critics opinions sentence could be more in depth. I don't mind copyediting this sentence if you like?
It would be amazing if you did... Please do! :) - Saulo Talk to Me 16:42, 31 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Okay I will do this last. Aaron • You Da One 16:32, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Done. Aaron • You Da One
  • "(You Drive Me) Crazy" attained worldwide success, peaking inside the top ten in seventeen countries. → "(You Drive Me) Crazy" was a commercial success, and peaked inside the top ten on the singles charts of seventeen countries.
 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 16:42, 31 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Would be good to say that it peaked at number one on a chart.
 Done - Saulo Talk to Me 16:42, 31 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "a big dance routine" → Can you reword this? It's a bit weak.
 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 16:42, 31 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "on a" → Is "a" necessary here?
 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 16:42, 31 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 16:42, 31 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Background

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  • reach a teen public → target a teenage audience
 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 17:16, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • You've linked Stockholm, Sweden twice. Unlink the second instance.
 Done - Saulo Talk to Me 17:16, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "(You Drive Me) Crazy" was written Jörgen Elofsson, while song production and additional songwriting was done by Martin, Per Magnusson and David Kreuger. Spears recorded the vocals for the song in March 1998, at Cheiron Studios in Stockholm, Sweden. It was also mixed at Cheiron Studios by Martin. Esbjörn Öhrwall and Johan Carlberg played the guitar, while bass guitar was done by Thomas Lindberg. Keyboards and programming was done by Kreuger, and additional keyboards by Magnusson. → Source(s)?
 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 17:16, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • On May 1999, → In May 1999,
 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 17:16, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Max Martin and Spears → Removed Max, we only use their full name the first time they are mentioned.
 Done - Saulo Talk to Me 17:16, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • was released in a remixed form → was released as a remix package
 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 17:16, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Composition

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  • I think this would be useful for you to structure this section.
There isn't much info to add to it, but I did some changes, so take a look. - Saulo Talk to Me 19:37, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Reception - Critical response

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  • This section is quite short, is this all the reviews?
I think so, I'm still trying to find more reviews for it... :( - Saulo Talk to Me 17:17, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • The song received generally favorable reviews → "(You Drive Me)" Crazy" garnered positive reviews
 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 17:17, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • MTV writer Kyle Anderson also considered "(You Drive Me) Crazy" as → Kyle Anderson for MTV considered the song as
 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 17:17, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Spence D. of IGN considered "Sometimes" a "[Max] Martin's glossy grown-up pop" song,[14] → What does this have to do with (You Drive Me) Crazy? Lol.
Lol sorry!  Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 17:17, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Do you want me to c/e this section a bit?
Yes, please! :) - Saulo Talk to Me 17:17, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Reception - Chart performance

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  • I'm confused as to why this section is so short? By the looks of the chart table below, the song charted in a lot of territories. This section could definitely be expanded into a standalone section, not a sub section. Summarize them in these paragraphs: Oceanic (Australia and NZ), European and American. Then I will go through the section.
Ok, I'll work on it. - Saulo Talk to Me 17:17, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
 Done - Saulo Talk to Me 19:38, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Music video

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  • Jive Records commissioned a music video for the song to be directed by Nigel Dick. → The song's accompanying music video was directed by Nigel Dick. Also, source?
 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 17:34, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • The concept was created by Spears herself → Spears conceptualized the video's treatment, and explained during an interview with MTV in 1999 that "it would be....
 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 17:34, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Put the source at the end of this quote too.
 Done - Saulo Talk to Me 17:34, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • on the video → in the video
 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 17:34, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • ...on the film's soundtrack. At first, Grenier didn't wanted to participate. → ...on the film's soundtrack, however, Grenier did not want to participate.
 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 17:34, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Dick also revealed that he was impressed by the singer's work ethic, saying, "Britney came to the set completely rehearsed. Certainly whenever I worked with her, she had an extraordinary work ethic, which I was always impressed by." → You say what the quotes says, try and paraphrase the quote into prose instead.
 Done - Saulo Talk to Me 17:34, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • The music video premiered on MTV's Making the Video special that aired on July 18, 1999,[27] while debuting on TRL at number four, on August 24, 1999.[28] It is the longest running by a female artist on TRL, staying on the top ten for seventy-three days.[18] → Hmm, this bothers me. The second paragraph needs reworking. Add the premiere date to the first paragraph, expand the second with a much better synopsis, then add the TRL and info after the synopsis, then reviews.
Take a look and see what needs to be fixed. - Saulo Talk to Me 17:34, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Live performances and covers

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 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 17:42, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Any more info about these two performances? Reviews? What she wore? What she did?
I'm searching for those. - Saulo Talk to Me 17:42, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • , to perform the track. → remove
 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 17:42, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 17:42, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 17:42, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • performed a tribute → I don't know why but I always associate the word "tribute", with regard to music, as being something for someone who is either old or dead. Lol. Maybe find another word?
Take a look. - Saulo Talk to Me 17:42, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Track listings

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  • Change to "Formats and track listings"
 Done - Saulo Talk to Me 17:52, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Why do you use [...] instead of (...) for the names of remixes etc.?
    Becase when it's a remix, the common is to use [...]. When it's part of the song's name, we use (...). Since the song is (You Drive Me) Crazy, it would make much sense to use (YDM) C (...). That's what I think, but if it needs to be changed, then I'll do it. - Saulo Talk to Me 17:52, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    No it's okay.

Credits and personnel

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  • Include the recording location(s)?

Charts and certifications - Weekly Charts

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  • Years for peak positions are mean't to be in separate tables. So you should have one for 1999 peaks, 2000 peaks and 2012 peak. You could use this as an example.
 Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 18:07, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Charts and certifications - Year end charts

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Charts and certifications - Certifications

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  • No issues.

Release history

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  • Why isn't there a table for this?! Lol.
Because we don't have specific release dates for the song. - Saulo Talk to Me 18:09, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Can always find them. Look here. Look through the Amazon's. Aaron • You Da One 18:59, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Take a look. I'll add the link you posted. - Saulo Talk to Me 19:12, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The chart needs an update, someone left out the US 2x vinyl release

http://www.discogs.com/Britney-Spears-You-Drive-Me-Crazy/release/117306 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ong312 (talk • contribs) 09:18, 19 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

References

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  • Refs 1 and 2 are both Rolling Stone, but are formatted differently? 1's Rolling Stone isn't linked, but the second is. Should be the other way around. Wenner Media should be the publisher for both. Check other Rolling Stone references too.
  • Ref 7 has a missing publisher, which is Viacom
  • Ref 11 per consensus shouldn't actually have the url included.
  • Ref 12 doesn't need to be linked again.
  • Ref 15 doesn't need to be linked (Rolling Stone, Wenner Media). You only link them the first time you use them for references.
  • Ref 22 should be Official Charts Company
  • Ref 32 RPM is already linked in ref 31.
  • Ref 37 has missing work and publisher parameters
  • Ref 38 work is MTV Networks and the publisher is Viacom.
  • Ref 39 same as ref 38 and need to be unlinked
  • Ref 40 same as ref 38 and 39 and need to be unlinked.
  • Ref 41 they don't need to be linked again
  • Ref 43 they don't need to be linked again
  • Ref 45 title shouldn't be in capitals
  • Ref 46 they don't need to be linked again
  • Ref 48 they don't need to be linked again. You need to make sure that you are consistent with work and publisher parameters and that they are only linked the first time.
  • Ref 50, 51, 52, 53 Jive don't need to be linked again.
  • Ref 84 Amazon doesn't need to be checked again.

You need to check through several times. Aaron • You Da One 21:28, 6 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Take a look and see if everything is fixed. I think it is, but I may have missed something. - Saulo Talk to Me 01:15, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
To be honest, I can't actually see where you have made corrections to these?? I picked a few at random and they hadn't been fixed. You need to go through several times. Aaron • You Da One

Summary

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References need work, but on hold for 7 days. Aaron • You Da One 21:59, 6 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Ref issues appear fixed, so if that's the final issue then this can be passed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:01, 24 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Passing then. Aaron • You Da One 10:36, 2 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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