Talk:Élie Okobo

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Review: April 29, 2018. (Reviewed version).

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 15:41, 27 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Taking this one on. Courcelles (talk) 15:41, 27 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Surely more than one source is speculating/rating his draft prospects?
"the Bordeaux native began his club career at a young age" Just specify the age, don't handwave at it.
"17 points, five rebounds, and eight assists" and several other incidents of this type of thing. Within a sentence, either use numerals all the time or write out all the similar quantities. Se either use 5 and 8, or use seventeen.
At least three incidents of "vs." in the prose. Write out versus and lose the period.

Otherwise looks good. Courcelles (talk) 16:00, 27 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- Updated. TempleM (talk) 16:05, 29 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  - Looks good, passing. Courcelles (talk) 16:08, 29 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]