Talk:"The Above Ground Sound" of Jake Holmes

Unreliable site

I removed the following to talk:

• SHiloh Noone. "Jake Holmes Music Reviews - Hippyland". hippy.com. Retrieved 10 Mar, 2009. {{cite web}}: Check date values in: |accessdate= (help)

Also, this talk page was deleted before, and has not been restored. Ikip (talk) 15:46, 21 April 2009 (UTC)

incorrect information

• The instruments used are drums, an electric bass and Jake Holmes on the acoustic guitar.

Dazed and Confused

• The lyrics weren't changed--only seven or eight words were. There's a website on this somewhere that lists the two side by side and highlights the differences.

not sure where this comes from, the lyrics are entirely different. Not a single line in common. Other then the title you would not recognize it as the same song from reading the lyics. Gjxj (talk) 20:13, 27 July 2021 (UTC)

• Page didn't change any of the melody. He only added a guitar solo instead of a breakdown and the guitar lines in the middle that begin with the B5 chord; he avoided a plagiarism lawsuit because Jake Holmes chose not to take legal action. (It should be noted, though, that I don't know what criteria is required for a plagiarism lawsuit, so these actions may be all that he had to do.)

I suggest these changes hoping that somebody with more wikipedia writing experience will look into it and edit the main page. I do own the album and can assure you that the point about the instruments is correct. -zb 67.197.196.188 (talk) 16:46, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Dead link

During several automated bot runs the following external link was found to be unavailable. Please check if the link is in fact down and fix or remove it in that case!

• http://www.culturecatch.com/music/jake-holmes-dangerous-times
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--JeffGBot (talk) 04:06, 30 May 2011 (UTC)