Draft talk:Wonderful Drinks

Contested deletion

This page is not unambiguously promotional, because I am trying to create a similar article to Coca-Cola or Red Bull. A healthy, high quality version. I'm just trying out Wikipedia, I'm fascinated about startups and I like their products. So I'm writing about them. Others prefer the unhealthy brands and write about those instead. It's an incredible, new, tiny company with healthy, high quality products and I don't quite understand why you aren't rather deleting the unhealthy brands. – Because they're bigger? – Again: I'm just fascinated about startups. No one is paying me. — Preceding unsigned comment added by KorneliaStoiber (talk • contribs) 00:45, 6 Oct 2024 (UTC)

@KorneliaStoiber: The tone of the text was unacceptably promotional; it felt like it could have been lifted from the company's website. I have rewritten it with a more neutral tone. —C.Fred (talk) 00:49, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much. I'll try to choose more neutral formulations in the future. KorneliaStoiber (talk) 01:14, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]